Mmph. Right. See what I remember looking at these-
Cut final paragraph from "Isle of Stones"
"Blood Springs," "Helheim," and "Peat Bogs" are the first person conversions.
"The Garden" needs a re-write, but I want that one in third person. I think. Not sure. Either way, it's almost too dry. If you can do something with it cool, but let the other ones take priority.
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Date: 2004-07-27 08:37 pm (UTC)Cut final paragraph from "Isle of Stones"
"Blood Springs," "Helheim," and "Peat Bogs" are the first person conversions.
"The Garden" needs a re-write, but I want that one in third person. I think. Not sure. Either way, it's almost too dry. If you can do something with it cool, but let the other ones take priority.