Ok, ok, I've been bad on keeping up on reading stuff for Secret Cross. That said, I just went and read the short. And promptly added the LJ feed.
My initial thoughts? This looks god. Oh, yes. It does. I'm drooling for a print copy. I think your background's good material, but a bit too much to just introduce the short. Just needs more language tightening than anything else (my own biggest crime).
Maps. Hm. Depends on what you're needing. Physical prop, or digital work?
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Date: 2008-12-18 10:04 pm (UTC)Ok, ok, I've been bad on keeping up on reading stuff for Secret Cross. That said, I just went and read the short. And promptly added the LJ feed.
My initial thoughts? This looks god. Oh, yes. It does. I'm drooling for a print copy. I think your background's good material, but a bit too much to just introduce the short. Just needs more language tightening than anything else (my own biggest crime).
Maps. Hm. Depends on what you're needing. Physical prop, or digital work?